Hi Erik,
Thank you for your review. Responses inline.
Thanks,
David
On Mon, Feb 17, 2020 at 4:38 PM Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
[snip]
Are any of the recommendations for client resolvers in this document
covered the IPR (https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/3077/) claimed for:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8305#section-7
(which has some similar/related recommendations, especially 7.3)?
I was also an author on RFC 8305 and IPR claim 3077, but I am not a lawyer.
Speaking as an individual, I am not aware of any IPR related to
draft-cheshire-sudn-ipv4only-dot-arpa-15.
Apologies for the disclaimer, but if you're trying to ascertain whether a
specification is covered by a patent, I would suggest contacting a lawyer.
Otherwise, I think this is basically ready, with just a few random nits
noted below (and ignoring the jeremiad-esque tone about the
design/implications of the middlebox protocol nature of RFC 7050 ;-).
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
I have a PR that attempts to address these editorial comments here:
[ abstract ]
* 3rd para could be removed for brevity (but keep same in the intro)
Done
[ 4.1 ]
* Consider whether to including references to 1.1, 8.8, and 9.9
services. I think the following might suffice:
1.1.1.1 https://1.1.1.1
8.8.8.8 https://developers.google..com/speed/public-dns/
9.9.9.9 https://quad9.net/
Done
* s/is is/it is/
Done
[ 6 ]
I'm not sure I follow the logic about whether/why ipv4only.arpa
must not be a signed zone. It seems to me that the concluding
paragraph beginning with 'Consequently, ...' actually lays out
the rationale in the most straightforward manner in this section.
It's a nice TL;DR, but I'm not sure how to formulate a useful
recommendation for reflowing text to better highlight this.
I'm not sure how to act on this comment. Can you suggest text?
[ 8.1 ]
Consider referring to RFC 8499 for DNS terminology, if that improves
the descriptions of types of resolvers.
Added a reference to 8499.
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