Dear Pascal, that works for me. Thanks for attending my comments.
Cheers,
- vijay
On Mon, Jan 6, 2020, 4:17 AM Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hello Vijay
Good point. I suggest to add text in the intro that defines the acronym. The proposed modified sentence is;
"
In particular, 6LoWPAN ND introduces a unicast host Address Registration mechanism
that reduces the use of multicast compared to the Duplicate Address Detection (DAD)
mechanism defined in IPv6 ND.
"
It will show up with the next revision.
Many thanks!
Pascal
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> Document: draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12
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> 1/ Figure 6: Please expand the acronym DAD, this acronym is further used in
> S7.1. The expansion will aid in understanding the usage of DAD in S7.1.
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