Hi Thanks for the review, I updated the terms as you suggested in the latest version. Stig On Tue, Oct 29, 2019 at 10:48 AM Michael Scharf via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Michael Scharf > Review result: Ready > > This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's > ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written > primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's > authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF > discussion list for information. > > When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this > review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC > tsv-art@xxxxxxxx if you reply to or forward this review. > > As far as I can see there are no fundamental transport-related issues in this > document. All in all, the impact of selecting a Group Designated Router may be > quite similar to the existing PIM-SM selection of a Designated Router. > > A little bit of wordsmithing: In Section 6, it could be useful to replace the > term "enough total capacity" by another term, such as "enough available > capacity" or "enough spare capacity". The router links can obviously also carry > other, non-PIM traffic. Then there must be enough available bandwidth left for > the PIM traffic on top of non-PIM traffic. The term "total capacity" is a bit > vague; it could possibly refer to the physical link capacity (e.g., 1 Gbit/s > for Gigabit Ethernet). Only considering the physical link capacity would not be > correct. Actually, one could write more about the traffic engineering aspects > of GDR selection, e.g., whether it is realistic that traffic distribution is > really equal. Yet, given that there seems to be only one implementation > according to the shepherd write-up, just changing the term may be sufficient. > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
