Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Has Issues I reviewed this document as part of the Security Directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Security Area Directors. Document authors, document editors, and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other IETF Last Call comments. Document: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2019-10-10 IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-15 IESG Telechat date: 2019-10-17 Summary: Has Issues Major Concerns: The Abstract ans Section 1 say: "This is a non-standard proprietary extension." I understand that this is not a standards track document, so the "non-standard" part makes sense. However, what is the point of publishing a "proprietary" extension as an RFC. I would hope that interoperable implementations is the goal of publication. In Section 1, the use of "policy-wise" is unclear. Is this registration policy or something else? Minor Concerns: None. Nits: Section 1: s/label(LABEL)/label (LABEL)/ - s/(V-tld);/(V-tld)./ In addition, there are several places in the upper left corner of the title page: Internet Engineering Task Force
