Hi Erik, Thank you for your review and suggestions. We will update in the next revision. Thanks! Dhruv On Wed, Aug 28, 2019 at 7:28 AM Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Erik Kline > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-auto-bandwidth-10 > Reviewer: Erik Kline > Review Date: 2019-08-27 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-28 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > > Gentle reminder for the authors to double-check all the lower case "should"s, > "required"s, and "must not"s (etc) to make sure it's not important that they be > capitalized (since the case-sensitive requirements text is referenced). > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > There are some periodic grammatical changes that I think would be nice, but I > assume that can get sorted out with the RFC editor. > > Two random things I'll note: > > Section 1> I can't find "Path Control Element" in RFC 5440. Should this be > "Path Computation Element"? > > Section 5.2> > . s/speaker wish to disable/speaker wishes to disable/ > . s/of same type/of the same type/ >
