| Stewart, thanks for your review. Rick, thanks for agreeing to make the changes. I enetered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa
Hi Stewart,Thanks for the prompt review. We will wait for a few more reviews and publish a fixed document.Many thanks,Rick-----Original Message-----
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Subject: [manet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-
extension-05
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2019-08-06
IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-15
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: A well written document with a few nits that should be looked at.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
" The Dynamic Link Exchange Protocol (DLEP) [RFC8175] describes a"
Nits says that the "[]" brackets should be removed
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" None of the features introduced by this extension require extra
consideration by an implementation."
I think that should be
"None of the features introduced by this extension require extra
security consideration by an implementation."
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"Assign a new DLEP Extensions Registry value (TBD1) from the"
I think that should be
"Assign a new DLEP Extensions Type Values Registry value (TBD1) from the"
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