Good point.The IANA Considerations section in non-update RFC's primarily serves as a means if requesting IANA actions. When you consider how this maps to bis documents and bis-like updates, there is a conflict between IANA's expectations and Adam's desire to have the updated document be current as a whole, with discussion of changes put in an appendix, It might be possible to point out the actions required in the appendix but I have been thinking of the following as an alternative:
- Create, at the start of the IANA Considerations section, a new subsection entitled "What IANA now needs to do".
- For the rest of the section, organize as it would be with updates included in appropriate places, but distinguish, using tense/auxiliaries between things that IANA has already done and those that it has yet to do.
On Tue, May 21, 2019 at 10:03 AM Michelle Cotton <michelle.cotton@xxxxxxxx> wrote:Additional comments related to IANA Considerations for bis documents: What is most important is that the document clearly states what should be updated and what should not. We have seen varying instructions in bis documents where some replace all references and some replace just some. If authors can give clear and accurate instructions on what IANA is being requested to do, that is appreciated.
Hope this is helpful.
Thanks,
Michelle
From: ietf <ietf-bounces@xxxxxxxx> on behalf of Adam Roach <adam@xxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Sunday, May 19, 2019 at 2:00 PM
To: David Noveck <davenoveck@xxxxxxxxx>, Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
Cc: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@xxxxxx>, Carsten Bormann <cabo@xxxxxxx>, IETF Discussion Mailing List <ietf@xxxxxxxx>
Subject: [Ext] Re: [rfc-i] Evolving document sources over a long time (Re: Comments on draft-roach-bis-documents-00)
Thanks for the feedback! These seem like reasonable changes for the next version.
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On 5/19/19 9:54 AM, David Noveck wrote:
Thanks to everyone for their suggestions. Now that I've followed up on many of them, I'd like to tell everybody what I've found so that people can consider the implicationss for Adam's document and for the processing of upcoming updates to RFC5661. In particular, use of the existing v1 tools has proved quite helpful although it is not a panacea.
So what I've found is that:
- Even with the v1 xml2rfc, the .xml that I have gotten for RFC5661 from the RFC editor cannot be successfully processed. Whether you use the existing v2 xml2rfc or the v1 xml2rfc available on the web, considerable effort is required to get to an xml that can be processed successfully. The xml file I received from the RFC editor is attached as rfc5661Base.xml while the one I arrived at is attached as rfc5661Ready.xml.
- Processing of the best xml that I have been able to arrive at for rfc5661 using the current v2 xml2rfc results in a document which, when compared with rfc5661 using rfcdiff, has a large number of differences which might be considered spurious. Although I don't feel any of these are in fact spurious, they are numerous enough that it might be hard to make this determination quickly. The largest part of these differences concern text tables which rfcdiff flags as different even in cases in which the tables seem identical. Also, there re small formtting differences that resul from the use of the v2 xml2rfc as well as issues arsing from different handling policies for hyphenated words. I've attached the resulting .txt file as rfc5661Ready.txt so that people can rfcdiff it against rfc5661.
- Processing of the best xml that I have been able to arrive at for rfc5661 using the v1 xml2rfc available on the web results in a document which, when compared with rfc5661 using rfcdiff, shows a small number of differences but is not identical to rfc5661. Besides the small set of difference mentioned below, common to both v1 and v2 xml2rfc, the main issue concerns a number of cases in which the xml (and rfc5661) has two spaces following a period while the v1 xml2rfc has only a single space. This is a formatting change but if it is considered "spurious", then that spurious change is unavoidable when using the v1 xml2rfc. It can be avoided using the v2 xml2rfc but that causes many more differences with rfc5661, as discusssed above. I've attached the resulting .txt file as rfc5661ReadyV1.txt so that people can rfcdiff it against rfc5661.
- In addition there are a few differences that appear whether the v1 or v2 xml2rfc is used.
- One source of these concerrns the capitalization (or not) of the words "profile" and "type" in the titles of many stringprep-related sections. Since RFC5661 uses different forms in the section itself and in the table-of-contents, it is impossible to avoid one of those being different from RFC5661.
- Other problems arise from the different lengths of xml2rfc-generated introductory material before the table of contents. The page count is different for v1 and v2 but both differ from rfc5661.
- References to ancohor are handled differently in v1 and v2 but neither can be made to match the results in rfc5661.
- Another problem is that rfcdiff appears to have a bug resulting in it showing that a significant piece of the definition of CB_COMPOUND is missing, even though the .txt file shows no such difference :-(
Based on my experences, I'd like to suggest:
- That the following addition be made to item 3 in section 3.1 of Adam's document.
In evaluating whether such disqualifying changes have occurred, it is intended that changes due solely to changes in the tools used to generate RFC .txt files be allowed. In addition, issues resulting from changes made by the RFC editor but not reflected in the xml file for the RFC not interfere with IESG consideration of the document and can be made, if necessary, by the RFC editor after the revised documment is approved for publication.
- That the following addition be made to item 6 in section 3.1 of Adam's document.
This will include the AD's determination that the requirements of item 3 above have been met.
- That, if possible, somebody should fix the bug in rfcdiff noted above.
On Mon, May 13, 2019 at 5:22 AM David Noveck <davenoveck@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>> For RFC5661 and documents derived from it using Adam’s procedure, that ship has already sailed :-(..
> As the references section needs to be updated anyway (for the DOIs), I’m not sure this is really true. Or, if it is,> RFC 5661 maybe isn’t really a candidate for this process, because it may be impractical to re-generate the exact
> numbering that RFC 5661 used.
I had been assuming that you could turn off sortrefs and construct a reference section in the exact order that thev1 tool. I'll try some experientsto validate that approach.
.> > > Since RFC 5661, we also got DOIs on RFCs, so it is inevitable there are a lot of diffs.
>>
>> It is not inevitable as shown by the fact that I didn't run into that issue. It's kind of nice to know that there was an issue out there that I didn't run into :-)
>>
>> For reasons I really don't understand, the xml for rfc5661 does not include rfc reference from external libraries. It includes them inline, so a new rfc derived from that xml file will not include DOIs.
> Yes. All these RFC references would be updated by the RFC editor into current references.
That's not a problem for Adam's procedure :-). The RFC candidate considred by the IESG would still match
rfc5661. Then, during RFC editing, the reference section could be revised to include the DOI's.
>> That is not a problem for Adam's procedure, but it may be for the IESG or the RFC editor. I hope that, in processing RFC’s using Adam's procedure, people will overlook the lack of DOIs in the same way that they overlook other aspects of the document that would prevent a new document of that form from being published.
>AFAICT, they can’t, as the RFC editor has committed to providing DOIs.
Please see above:
- The IESG doesn't have to deal with the DOI diffs, since it won't see them.
- The RFC editor would create DOI diffs but not be bound by Adam's procedure in doing so.
Where this might be a problem is in document where the existing xml uses external reference libraries. That avoids the need for the RFC to do anything to provide the DOI's other that updating the libraries. However the IESG will see the diffs resulting from the inclusion of DOI's so I would hope that Adam's document is clear thar they should not be considered "spurous".
On Sun, May 12, 2019 at 12:57 PM Carsten Bormann <cabo@xxxxxxx> wrote:
Hi Julian,
> FWIW, I disagree (but I realize that I'm probably in a minority). The
> problem with Markdown is that the simple things are easy, but everything
> else gets messy. I'm looking forward to see how you kram (pun intended)
> the V3 features into your tool…
Do I have to?
If an author wants to use a V3 feature that does not lend itself to authoring in markdown, they can always put the XML tags right into their markdown source.
>>>> but that was the way things were done in 2010.
>>>
>>> I’m prepared to stick with that, unless there is something better about the alternatives.
>>
>> Right, for a minor update, digging out the v1 tools and finding a platform where they can still run may actually be the best way to proceed.
>
> All you need is a TCL processor. Works fine over here on a newly
> installed notebook with Windows 10 and Cygwin.
Haven’t tried that in a while…
Works for me, too (macOS 10.13.6, on a small document, with the usual formatting differences from v2…).
Good to know.
(Although I have heard people have had problems on other platforms recently.)
Grüße, Carsten
David,
A good suggestion, but it might be easier for IANA to just have two subsections in the IANA Considerations section:
- What IANA Now Needs to Do (this could be nothing, but should be explicit)
- What IANA Already Did in RFC XXXX
and keep this section identical to the original RFC.
Of course, we should ask Michelle what she would like to see! :-)
Cheers,
Andy
On Tue, May 21, 2019 at 1:51 PM David Noveck <davenoveck@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
