Dan, I have read Barry's two responses, Alissa's response, and your response to Barry, but this note seems the easiest one to which to respond. This particular draft is, as I understand it, OBE, but there are (still) a few things going on that are probably not visible from this particular I-D alone and that were even less visible in draft-faltstrom-unicode11-07. The draft and those issues has been discussed extensively in the recently-created I18n directorate and many, perhaps most, of the changes between -07 and -08 are the result of those discussions (the summary below might be consistent with those directorate discussions, but I'm not sure there is sufficient consensus there to make such a claim, so take the summary as my personal opinion). A bit of that perspective follows for those who have not been following IDNA or i18n issues closely; the IDNA-update list is copied in the hope that I (and Patrik and others) won't need to go through this too many more times. (1) This review of new Unicode versions and these IANA tables are inherently odd. Usually, when information is sent to IANA and put, by them, in a registry, the contents of that registry are considered the authoritative source of the information. As one of the older examples still in use, if there is a list of assigned port numbers floating around the Internet somewhere and the values in it are different from the values in the IANA registry ( https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers/service-names-port-numbers.xhtml ), the IANA registry is authoritative and that list is simply wrong. That is not the case for these IDNA-related tables. For them, according to the IDNA2008 specs (and RFC 5892 in particular) the authoritative information for a particular application or implementation is to pick the version of Unicode that application or implementation is using (in theory, at a given instant if that is changing) and then calculate the derived properties as specified from RFC 5892, and then use that information (if the implementation needs a table, that is how it is supposed to get the table). The WG was persuaded, after what, IIR, was considerable demand, to create the IANA registry and put tables in it, but that does not make the IANA tables authoritative, nor do they distinguish between supported code points or supported versions of Unicode, etc. (2) In a more perfect world, the review called for by RFC 5892 and reflected in RFC 6452 and this I-D would not be necessary at all. Unicode would announce a new version, assorted entities would calculate tables for their use with that version, and everyone would go merrily on their way. The IDNA-update WG was painfully aware of the imperfection of the world and, for this particular case, was worried about two possibilities (both of which we hoped would be very, very rare). One was that, for a new version of Unicode, the Unicode Consortium would make changes in the properties or category values they assigned to particular code points in a way that would change the derived properties calculated by the RFC 5892 algorithm for those code points. This I-D primarily reflects a review designed to detect such changes. As I read RFC 5892, if such cases are detected, the normal response is to introduce additional backward compatibility exceptions into the list in RFC 5892 to preserve stability (Patrik reads that a bit differently than I do). The other option is to leave the exception list in 5892 unchanged, but that means that an application using Unicode version YY and tables corresponding to it (and possibly a current set of IANA tables) is not going to behave in a way that is completely consistent (except for code points not allowed earlier because they were unassigned) with an application using Unicode version XX and corresponding IDNA tables). Ultimately, the choice is whether, for a particular code point whose Unicode properties have changed, to maintain consistency with Unicode changes or to maintain consistency within implementations that calculated IDNA derived properties based on an earlier Unicode version and are now recalculating. The second possible problem, to which this I-D pays little attention, is one in which it is discovered that some action (such as assigning a new code point) or other discovery exposes an issue or other behavior that was not anticipated by IDNA2008. This is obviously a much more complicated problem, harder to review for and detect and much harder to figure out what to do with. It was, however, precisely the sort of situation that we discovered when reviewing the additions in Unicode 7.0. That review led to the 2015 IAB statement and to draft-klensin-idna-5892upd-unicode70. If the issue were just about one code point, we could either make it an exception or ignore it, and move on. However, it isn't and examining it led to a series of still-unresolved issues about assumptions IDNA2008 made about Unicode and its evolution. Since that discovery in 2014, time and Unicode versions have moved on and applications and libraries that are based on doing their own derived property calculations (as IDNA2008 requires) have diverged more and more from any assumption that the tables available from IANA are somehow "current" or that other inferences can be drawn from them and the version of Unicode they reference. (3) As long as there are no changes or issues of either of the types described in (2) above, a reasonable reading of RFC 5892 is that the Designated Expert shrugs his or her shoulders, passes a new table off to IANA (or validates a new table that IANA calculates) and moves on, with no report to IESG or I-D that is expected to become an RFC required. Viewed that way, RFC 6452 was published only to confirm that, for the first version of Unicode to appear after the IDNA2008 docs were finalized, things were working as predicted and no IETF action was required. draft-faltstrom-unicode11 is significant, less because several years have passed and we need to catch up (and maybe explain) but because, between Unicode 6.x and 11.0 (or 12.0) we've discovered examples of both changed derived properties for code points that existed before the relevant Unicode version and a case of discovering an "other problem" that opens one or more cans of worms. (4) Because the IDNA requirement is that applications calculate derived properties (or find and use an appropriate table) that corresponds to whatever version of Unicode they are using, IANA's having a registry that consists only of the table corresponding to one particular version of Unicode seems inappropriate, unwise, and maybe inconsistent with that provision of the standard. It is fairly clear to me that sorting the above out and clarifying things to the point that confusion is considerably reduced and expectations of the Designated Expert(s) are clear should now be a reasonably high priority. It is almost equally clear that putting those clarifications in the critical path in front of publication of draft-faltstrom-unicode11 (or -unicode12), much less getting relatively more current tables into IANS's hands, would be unwise pragmatically, however much more satisfying it might be procedurally. Specific suggestions about how this might be untangled, text and ideas about where to put it, etc., would be very welcome (at least by me). best, john --On Monday, March 18, 2019 00:31 -0700 Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General > Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being > processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for > direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a > new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-faltstrom-unicode11-08 > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review Date: 2019-03-18 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-05 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > > This document is Ready. However, I have signaled one minor > issue in my LC review which was not addressed in the revision, > neither have I seen an answer to the clarification that I > requested (unless I missed some mail). > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > (from my previous review, not addressed) > > The IANA Considerations text is not clear to me. > >> IANA is requested to update the IDNA Parameters registry of >> derived > property values, after the expert reviewer validates that > the derived property values are calculated correctly. > > What does this exactly say? Are these recommendations for > future actions, or do they refer specifically to property > values described in this document? Are the expert reviewer > validation and IDNA Parameters registry update required to be > performed prior to approval of this document? > > Nits/editorial comments: > >