Robert, thank you for your review. Adrian, thank you for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Feb 26, 2019, at 10:11 AM, Adrian Farrel <adrian@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Hey Robert, > > Some detailed responses. > > The revision will be posted when the authors have signed off. > > Regards, > Adrian > >> The 2nd sentence of the introduction is complex. It should >> be easy to simplify. > > Done > >> It would help to place the reference to draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy >> label at "If encoding of entropy is desired". (Or if some other reference >> is better, use that) > > Used RFC 6790. > >> In that same paragraph, something is wrong at "make use of entropy >> label mechanism." Should that be "the entropy label mechanism"? > > Yes. I have done some gardening. > >> SRGB is used without expansion. > > Fixed. > >> Where is "the lower bound" of an SRGB defined? The string "lower bound" >> doesn't occur in either of the routing-extensions drafts referenced where >> SRGB is first used. > > The concept of an SRGB is defined in RFC 8402. I've added a reference to this at the first use of 'SRGB'. > >> Section 3.1 is about ostensibly about constructing a FIB entry, but its >> last step is sending a packet. > > Yes. Overly enthusiastic engineers! 😊 > I have jiggled the text so that the last couple of points are about how the FIB is used. > >> The first sentence in section 3.2 is more complex than it needs to be. It >> should be easy to simplify. > > OK > >> It would be nice if you could make the differences between the routers in >> figures 3 and 4 visually apparent rather than relying on text to explain the >> difference. Something like (view in a fixed width font): > > We looked at this, but decided against. If we adopt some kind of notation, we will still need to explain it in the text, and the explanation will only complicate things. > >> At the first paragraph on page 9: s/and then process/and then processes/ > > Yes > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
