Russ, thanks for your review. I pointed to it in my DISCUSS ballot. Alissa > On Feb 17, 2019, at 4:55 PM, Russ Housley <housley@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16 > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review Date: 2019-02-17 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-02-15 > IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-21 > > Summary: Ready > > > Major Concerns: > > None. > > > Minor Concerns: > > None. > > > Nits: > > In the Abstract: s/section 4 of [RFC7333]/RFC 7333/ > (because references are not permitted in the Abstract). > > In Section 3.1, last paragraph: drop the '(' and ')'. > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
