Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-06 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2018-11-30 IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-11 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major Concerns: None Minor Concerns: Section 5.3: To understand this section, I had to learn about "loose hops" from other sources. Please consider adding this term to the ones that are defined in Section 2. Nits: Throughout document: s/hop by hop/hop-by-hop/ Section 5.3.1: s/The net result is that by/As a result, by/
