> Nits/editorial comments: > > Page 18: “ptypes” →types > Page 22: “concocted” → connected? As Scott K says, "ptypes" is correct as written. "Concocted" is also correct as written. Barry
> Nits/editorial comments: > > Page 18: “ptypes” →types > Page 22: “concocted” → connected? As Scott K says, "ptypes" is correct as written. "Concocted" is also correct as written. Barry