On Saturday, November 03, 2018 03:49:22 AM Ines Robles wrote: > Reviewer: Ines Robles > Review result: Almost Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-dmarc-arc-protocol-18 > Reviewer: Ines Robles > Review Date: 11-03-2018 > IETF LC End Date: 11-06-2018 > IESG Telechat date: (if known) > > Summary: > > I believe the draft is technically good. This document is well written and > clear to understand. > > This document describes the Authenticated Received Chain (ARC) protocol, > which provides an authenticated "chain of custody" for a message, allowing > each entity that handles the message to see what entities handled it > before, and to see what the message's authentication assessment was at each > step in the handling. > > I like that the document mentions the available implementations. > > Major issues: Not found > > Minor issues: > > There is a TODO in Appendix B, so I suppose further information will be > added to the draft later. > > Nits/editorial comments: > > Page 18: “ptypes” →types ptypes is correct here. See RFC 7601 Section 2.3. Scott K > Page 22: “concocted” → connected? > > Thank you for this draft. > > Ines
