Hi Elwyn, Good catch on the points below. They’re fixed in the new version. Thanks, Ian > On 4. Oct 2018, at 17:31, Elwyn Davies <elwynd@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05 > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review Date: 2018-10-04 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-07 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11 > > Summary: > Ready. Thanks for addressing my comments from the last call review. There are a > couple of remaining trivial nits. > > Major issues: > None. > > Minor issues: > None. > > Nits/editorial comments: > S7.5 , para 2: s/The default time minimum time/The default minimum time/ > > s10: I missed a third instance where the following change ought to be made > (sorry): OLD: in the table at > https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: NEW: in the Option Codes > table at https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: ENDS > > _______________________________________________ > dhcwg mailing list > dhcwg@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dhcwg
