Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05 Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2018-10-04 IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-07 IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11 Summary: Ready. Thanks for addressing my comments from the last call review. There are a couple of remaining trivial nits. Major issues: None. Minor issues: None. Nits/editorial comments: S7.5 , para 2: s/The default time minimum time/The default minimum time/ s10: I missed a third instance where the following change ought to be made (sorry): OLD: in the table at https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: NEW: in the Option Codes table at https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: ENDS
