Hi, Joel Halpern <jmh@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-?? > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review Date: 2018-10-03 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-29 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11 > > Summary: This document seems to meet the specific requirements for publication > as a proposed standard. > > Major issues: > It is still this reviewer's opinion that for a reader who has not been > involved in the discussion in the working group, the document is quite > unclear and confusing. For somewhat more details, please see my previous > review at > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-10-genart-lc-halpern-2018-06-28/ I'm sorry to hear that you find it confusing. I was under the impression that the edits that we made after your previous review were sufficient. /martin > > Minor issues: > N/A > > Nits/editorial comments: > N/A > > > _______________________________________________ > netmod mailing list > netmod@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod >
