Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2018-08-14 IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-08 IESG Telechat date: 2018-08-16 Summary: This is useful work, it is well written and is ready for publication Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I accept that I am going to be in the rough, but I do not like the term "on the wire". My recollection from my hardware days is that the output shift register sends the data in such a way that if I were to put an oscilloscope on the wire, the bit patterns would not match those shown in this text. What I think are presented in the text are raw RFC1035 messages in network byte order.
