Thanks. See below. Cheers, Mehmet > -----Original Message----- > From: Martin Bjorklund <mbj@xxxxxxxxxx> > Sent: Friday, June 29, 2018 8:40 PM .... > > - In 2.1. Glossary of New Terms > > As there are indeed terms which are not new I would suggest to change > > the section title to: "Glossary of Used Terms". One can even merge > > section 2 and section 2.1. > > Ok. I suggest we remove 2.1 and instead add: > > The following additional terms are used within this document: Sounds good. > > > - As one of the commenters indicated, the words "schema mount" are > > often used casually and without an article. Though what the author > > means is "the schema mount mechanism" which is specifically defined in > this document. > > In the Introduction, the document says: > > This document introduces a new mechanism, denoted as schema > mount, that allows for mounting one data model [...] > > so I wonder if the solution to both these problem is to define "schema > mount" as a term in 2.1, instead of replacing "schema mount" with "the > schema mount mechanism" in the whole document? This is fine. To qualify the specific new term I would like to suggest to use an article in appropriate cases. > > /martin
