Reviewer: Mehmet Ersue Review result: Has Nits I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Intended status: Standards Track Current IESG state: Waiting for Writeup IANA review state: Not OK / Expert review needed (see https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount/history/) Summary: The document defines a mechanism to add the schema trees defined by a set of YANG modules onto a mount point defined in the schema tree in some YANG modules. I think the document is well-written and can be published after addressing last issues indicated by different reviews. A few nits below: - In 2. Terminology and Notation for both "system-controlled interface" and "YANG library checksum": s/are not/is not/ - In 2.1. Glossary of New Terms As there are indeed terms which are not new I would suggest to change the section title to: "Glossary of Used Terms". One can even merge section 2 and section 2.1. - As one of the commenters indicated, the words "schema mount" are often used casually and without an article. Though what the author means is "the schema mount mechanism" which is specifically defined in this document. Regards, Mehmet
