Acee,
I’m fine with leaving out positive. I was actually trying to cover the case where someone might interpret the TLV definition to allow zero SRGBs.. It’s nonsensical, of course, to do so.
-Peter
On Jun 13, 2018, at 7:08 AM, Acee Lindem (acee) <acee@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hi Peter,
Thanks for thoroughly reviewing this document again and finding the nits. I incorporated all your comments other than adding "positive" as while it is more precise, it reads better without it and we don't want to imply that a TLV length could ever be negative. See attached diff.
Thanks,
Acee
On 6/13/18, 3:04 AM, "Peter Yee" <peter@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-21
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2018-06-12
IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-12
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: This document is ready for publication, although there are a few nits
that should be corrected prior to publication. I am not a routing expert, so I
cannot vouch for the correctness of this specification, but it otherwise
appears consistent and reflect s the many iterations it has undergone.
Major issues: None.
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
General:
Expand uncommon acronyms on first use. (See:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt.). Acronyms need
expansion include: AS, ECMP, and EBGP.
Specific:
Page 3, 7th paragraph, last sentence: actually, this isn’t a complete sentence.
I’m not sure what you wanted to do with the fragment.
Page 5, 2nd full paragraph, last sentence: change “prefix-SID” to “BGP
Prefix-SID” to make usage in the remainder of the document.
Page 7, Section 3.2, 2nd bullet item: insert “positive” before “multiple”.
Page 9, last paragraph, 1st sentence: delete “to”.
Page 12, 1st paragraph after the (unlabeled) Value/Type/Reference table, last
sentence: insert “ Prefix” before “-SID”.
Page 12, 2nd paragraph after the (unlabeled) Value/Type/Reference table, last
sentence: insert “ Prefix” before “-SID”.
<Diff draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-21.txt - draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-22.txt>
