Here is the whole section, which is a single paragraph: 7. Privacy Considerations Different places have different constraints on individual privacy. The requirements in this memo are intended to provide for some limited protections that attendees can apply. As meetings are announced, IASA SHALL inform the IETF of any limitations to privacy they have become aware of in their investigations. For example, participants would be informed of any regulatory authentication or logging requirements. This note reveals no personally identifying information apart from its authorship. I do not understand the use of "attendees can apply" in the second sentence. I think the requirements in this memo set some expectations, and then the next few sentence say that the IAOC shall tell the community about anything that is out of the norm. But it does not really say that. I do not understand the last sentence. This note reveals email addresses of the authors. I think the last sentence should be removed or it should become an additional paragraph with more explanation. Russ |
