Section 7
The requirements in this memo are intended to provide for some
limited protections that attendees can apply.
This reads oddly to me -- we provide for limited
privacy protections that attendees can choose to apply but are not
universally applied without explicit action? What are they?
The text would read more naturally to me as "to provide for some
limited protections that apply to attendees", though that does of
course have a different meaning.
I propose the following: 7. Privacy Considerations
Different places have different constraints on individual privacy.
The requirements in this memo are intended to provide for some
limited protections.
I do not think that the memo itself provides any privacy protections. Rather, the IAOC process described in the memo takes individual privacy as one factor in venue selection.
Russ
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