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Hi Tom, We just updated the draft, https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework/.
Your comments are addressed in the latest version. You can find the detail changes to your comments inline below. BR, Amy -----Original Message----- I wonder what [I-D.ahlberg-ccamp-microwave-radio-link] an Informative reference to an expired I-D from 2016 containing little more than a YANG module, adds that [I-D.ietf-ccamp-mw-yang] a fully fledged I-D, in WG Last Call, with very similar data structures and accompanying text, does not provide. I am puzzled to read " The recommendation is to use the structure of the IETF: Radio Link Model [I-D.ahlberg-ccamp-microwave-radio-link] as the starting point, " when a more recently worked on I-D is available. [Amy] remove the reference to [I-D.ahlberg-ccamp-microwave-radio-link], and replace with [I-D.ietf-ccamp-mw-yang].
The I-D includes MUST and must, SHOULD and should, but no reference to RFC8174; I think that this needs a further look. [Amy] add reference to RFC8174.
The normatively referenced RFC7223 and RFC7277 have both been superseded by I-Ds that have been around for quite a while while rfc8022bis is well on its way to superseding the referenced RFC8022.. [Amy] update the reference to the latest RFCs.
Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "The IESG" <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx> To: "IETF-Announce" <ietf-announce@xxxxxxxx> Cc: <ccamp@xxxxxxxx>; <ccamp-chairs@xxxxxxxx>;
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<draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework@xxxxxxxx> Sent: Friday, April 06, 2018 8:20 PM Subject: Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05.txt> (A framework for Management and Control of microwave and millimeter wave interface parameters) to Informational RFC > > The IESG has received a request from the Common Control and Measurement Plane > WG (ccamp) to consider the following document: - 'A framework for Management > and Control of microwave and millimeter > wave interface parameters' > <draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05.txt> as Informational RFC > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
> ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2018-04-20. Exceptionally, comments may be > sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of > the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Abstract > > > The unification of control and management of microwave radio link > interfaces is a precondition for seamless multilayer networking and > automated network provisioning and operation. > > This document describes the required characteristics and use cases > for control and management of radio link interface parameters using a > YANG Data Model. > > The purpose is to create a framework for identification of the > necessary information elements and definition of a YANG Data Model > for control and management of the radio link interfaces in a > microwave node. Some parts of the resulting model may be generic > which could also be used by other technologies. > > > > > The file can be obtained via >
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework/ > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework/ba llot/ > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > > |
