The Vary response header refers to this HTTP header: https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/HTTP/Headers/Vary
I think an additional definition/citation is unnecessary, as other basic concepts of HTTP are also left undefined/uncited in the spec..
Please let me know if that's not acceptable, and I'll look for a way to add a citation.
Thank,
Dirk.
On Thu, May 3, 2018 at 1:35 PM Linda Dunbar <Linda.dunbar@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-05-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-12
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10
Summary:
The document is written very clear, easy to understand, and content is
complete.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
Section 2 Page 4:
Question: is "Very response" a specific response in the following sentence? If
yes, need to provide the definition as I don't see it being defined anywhere
"MAY be listed by a server in a Vary response header field,.."
thank you.
Linda dunbar
