Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-13.txt> (IETF Plenary Meeting Venue Selection Process) to Best Current Practice

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Thanks for putting this document together.  I have one overall comment and a couple of nits.

I think that an overall goal is missing.  We try to share the load among IETF participants.  That is the reason we rotate between North America, Europe, and Asia-Pacific.  Without this goal, the IETF might select the one perfect location and hold every meeting there.


The document uses "Venue" and "venue" in many, many places.  I cannot figure out what the presence or absence of the capital letter is trying to convey.


Section 4 says:

   The IETF Community works best when it is best informed.

It might be better to say:

   The IETF Community works best when it is well informed.


In Section 1, please update the last paragraph to reference RFC 8174 in addition to RFC 2119, as follows: 

   The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
   "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and
   "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in
   BCP 14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in
   all capitals, as shown here.

Russ


> On Apr 5, 2018, at 4:12 PM, The IESG <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> 
> The IESG has received a request from the Meeting Venue WG (mtgvenue) to
> consider the following document: - 'IETF Plenary Meeting Venue Selection
> Process'
>  <draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-13.txt> as Best Current
>  Practice
> 
> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
> comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
> ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2018-04-19. Exceptionally, comments may be
> sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of
> the Subject line to allow automated sorting.
> 
> Abstract
> 
> 
>   The IASA has responsibility for arranging IETF plenary meeting Venue
>   selection and operation.  This memo specifies IETF community
>   requirements for meeting venues, including hotels and meeting room
>   space.  It directs the IASA to make available additional process
>   documents around that describe the current meeting selection process.
> 
> 
> 
> 
> The file can be obtained via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process/
> 
> IESG discussion can be tracked via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process/ballot/
> 
> 
> No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
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