Hi, >As a relative newcomer to IETF, I can perhaps give two (hopefully >positive) suggestions (sorry, none of which is technical): > >(1) From taking a very quick look at your drafts, it may be helpful to >have three sections at the top of the drafts that answer these 3 >questions (before you describe the new protocols): > i) What is the problem that the draft is solving? > ii) Why the problem cannot be cleanly solved with existing >protocols/technology (which would normally be much cheaper than >designing a new protocol)? > iii) How does the new protocol/technology solves the problem? > >I.e. I think that you need to first convince the community that there is >a problem to be solved, before they will invest their time looking at a >solution. Also, I think the Introduction section of the draft should answer (at least on a high-level) the 3 questions above, so that people don¹t have to read through the draft just to figure out the answers. Regards, Christer