Hi Jouni,
Thanks for the review.
> On 2 Dec 2017, at 5:26 am, Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
[...]
> Minor Issues: Editorials
>
> o The document does not pass IDnits.
>
> ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 2818
>
> This is obviously intentional but I did not see any mention of this e.g., in
> the proto write-up.
FWIW, 2818 is in the downref registry.
> -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 5988
> This should obviously be 8288 as it obsoletes 5988.
Thanks, fixed in source.
> o line 256 s/clients SHOULD not/clients SHOULD NOT
I see this on line 303 of the .txt of -04; did you see it elsewhere?
> o line 146 s/The origin frame/The ORIGIN frame
Likewise, I see this on line 173 of the .txt -04.
> o line 429 What does "case-normalization" mean? I could not immediately find
> that expression, at least not in the referenced RFC6454. If it means making the
> ORIGIN header values lower case, just state that.
In the referenced spec:
"""
5. Let uri-host be the host component of the URI, converted to lower
case (using the i;ascii-casemap collation defined in [RFC4790]).
"""
I've added a reference to the step number to clarify.
Thanks again,
Mark Nottingham https://www.mnot.net/