Hi Tim, Thanks for your review. As you are correct, your review has been reused by Benoit in his discuss/comments. In order to avoid duplication of emails/threads, I'll rather (only) answer the thread from Benoit. Thanks, Regards, --Bruno > -----Original Message----- > From: Tim Wicinski [mailto:tjw.ietf@xxxxxxxxx] > Sent: Tuesday, August 29, 2017 2:38 PM > To: ops-dir@xxxxxxxx > Cc: ospf@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap.all@xxxxxxxx; ietf@xxxxxxxx > Subject: Opsdir last call partial review of draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06 > > > Review is partially done. Another review request has been registered for > completing it. > > Reviewer: Tim Wicinski > Review result: Has Issues > > Summary: Almost Ready > > The content appears to be fine, but there are some outdated (the biggest one is > 5226 replaced by 8126), but its the IANA section which appears the most > confusing. > > 7.1 OSPF Router Information (RI) Registry - appears fine > > 7.2 OSPF Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Sub-TLV Registry > > This one defines the values being defined/allocated from "This Document" but in > Section 5, each Sub-TLV is defined in other documents, so it's totally > confusing. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.