Hi Daniel,
Thank you for your response, and for addressing my comment. Yes, the edits address my concern, this is exactly the kind of clarification text that IMO was missing. I suggest to publish the revised version as soon as you address all other comments. The document can be approved by the IESG if they believe it's ready and will wait in the RFC Editor Queue because of the dependency on TLS 1.3. On Thu, May 18, 2017 at 8:44 PM, Daniel Migault <daniel.migault@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hi Dan,
Thank you for your reviews and comments. I believe the following text provides more explanation on how the provided cipher suites are negotiated by TLS1.3 as well as why point codes defined in the document does not apply to TLS1.3. Feel free to let me know if that address your concern and I can publish version 04 with the text below.
Unlike TLS1.2, TLS1.3 separates authentication and cipher suite negotiation <xref target="I-D.ietf-tls-tls13"/> Section 1.2. TLS1.3 supports PSK with ECDHE key exchange and the cipher suites TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256, TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384, TLS_AES_128_CCM_8_SHA256 and TLS_AES_128_CCM_SHA256 are part of the specification. As a result, TLS 1.3 and higher versions, negotiate and support these cipher suites in a different way.
I am not sure we have to wait for the publication of TLS1.3 as changes on TLS1.3 are unlikely to impact the code point assigned. However, we currently have TLS1.3 as a normative reference.
Yours,
Daniel
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Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
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Document: draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-??
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2017-05-15
IETF LC End Date: 2017-05-18
IESG Telechat date: 2017-05-25
Summary:
This is a straight-forward and clear document that defines several new cipher suites for the Transport Layer Security (TLS) protocol version
1.2 and higher, based on the Ephemeral Elliptic Curve Diffie-Hellman with Pre-Shared Key (ECDHE_PSK) key exchange together with the Authenticated Encryption with Associated Data (AEAD) algorithms AES-GCM and AES-CCM. The document is well written and I appreciate the effort to clarify in the Introduction the context, what was missing, and why the document is necessary. The document is Ready, there is one issue about support for TLS version 1.3 and higher that may need some text clarification.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Section 4 ('Applicable TLS Versions') describes in details how the cipher suites defined in the document make use of the authenticated encryption with additional data (AEAD) defined in TLS 1.2 [RFC5246] and DTLS 1.2 [RFC6347]. About TLS 1.3 it just says:
' TLS 1.3 and above version, negotiate and support these cipher suites in a different way.'
This may raise some concerns as 'in a different way' is ambiguous, especially compared to the details included for TLS 1.2. Moreover, TLS
1.3 is still work-in-progress, and I believe that this document when approved needs to wait for TLS 1.3 to be approved for publication.
Will anything change, or need to be added? Some better clarification text would help IMO.
Nits/editorial comments: