Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-dual-homing-protection-05 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2017-02-07 IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-13 IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-02 Summary: Ready Major Concerns: None Minor Concerns: None Nits: In the last sentence of the first paragraph of Section 1, the document says: "This mechanism is only applicable ..." I believe that this is a reference to the repair mechanism that is defined in [I-D.ietf-pals-endpoint-fast-protection], not the mechanism that is defined in this document. Please replace "This mechanism" with a clear reference. Notes: I see that draft-cheng-pwe3-mpls-tp-dual-homing-protection the earlier Internet-Draft file name for this document. An IPR declaration was issued against that earlier name. The shepherd write-up indicates that "The WG were not concerned about the IPR disclosure." However, it is unclear to me whether we should ask for the IPR declaration to be issued against the current Internet-Draft file name.