--On Thursday, September 15, 2016 11:13 -0400 "Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > As the draft is probably about IETF process, not RFC Editor > rules, I would think that ietf@xxxxxxxx would be the venue for > discussing the draft, >... I concur with Joel about the above. Note that there have been multiple discussions on the topics of "what does 'updates' mean" and "what should saying 'updates' require" with the RFC Editor and, at least as few times, with the IESG in the last decade or so. My recollection is that there have also been a few discussions of the same topic on this list, mostly during Last Call discussions about the adequacy of various documents and the closely-related topic of what it means to have a normative reference to an obsoleted document or an updated section of an earlier one. Those discussions have exposed another issue, which is that we have no way to obsolete a section (even an appendix) of a document, only to update it to deprecate that section. There are also some interactions between this work and the late NEWTRK efforts whether one views the failure of those efforts to be a good thing or, at the other extreme, an abuse of power by the IESG and a significant loss to the community. However, one obvious lesson from that work is that our failure to be specific about something in a BCP sometimes indicates that we have made an effort to agree and failed, rather than that we have not considered the issue. NEWTRK aside, it is not clear to me that any of those discussions have reached any conclusion, almost certainly not a conclusion that has been put through Last Call or otherwise gotten to a stage where anyone could claim community consensus around the conclusions. It appears to me that several of them suggest that being precise about what is changed or what sections of earlier documents are affected is at least as important as the "reason for changes" on which the current I-D appears to be focused. Independent of where it is discussed (as long as it is on a public list), this I-D would be, at least IMO, a much more satisfactory basis for discussion if it demonstrated more convincingly that the author was aware of those earlier discussions and had considered them, rather than assuming (or appearing to assume) that no one had thought about these topics. best, john