Re: [CCAMP] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-05 - Nits/editorial items

Ramon Casellas <ramon.casellas@xxxxxxx> · Mon, 24 Aug 2015 12:49:17 +0200



    Adrian, all

      
      Thanks, pleasee see inline

      
      El 05/08/2015 a las 15:02, Adrian Farrel escribió:

    
        Right, thanks Fatai. You have
            put us right.
         
        But David and I both got
            confused by Figure 3, and perhaps by the difference between
            n and m.
         
        I suggest
         
        OLD
                 Slot width = 25
            GHz     Slot width =
            37.5 GHz
        NEW
                 Slot width = 25
            GHz     Slot width =
            37.5 GHz
                     n = 4,   m = 2          n = 6,  m = 3      
        END
         
      
    Ramon> ok to change, but don't you mean

    
    NEW
            
        Slot width = 25 GHz     Slot
        width = 37.5 GHz
         
            n = 0,   m = 2                 n = 7,  m = 3      
    

        OLD
              *  The '--' represents the
            nominal central frequency granularity
        NEW
              *  The '--' represents the
            nominal central frequency granularity in units of 6.25 GHz
        END
         
      
    Ramon> changed as your suggestion (although I could even argue
    that it is not even necessary to explain '--' it can be seen as the
    frequency axis and by definition the separation between adjacent 'n'
    is 6.25 GHz....)

    
    Thanks

    Ramon