On 3/4/15 9:43 PM, Jari Arkko wrote:
I wanted to come back to the status of the discussions. We have an ongoing discussion of the changes Marc made on the -02. My read of the feedback is that the update has done the right things, but: 1) Paul Hoffman’s clarifications& editorial changes seem useful, but I would like to hear what others think.
I think Paul's suggested change to the first paragraph in section 1 is spot on. Now that RSSAC has completed RSSAC001, perhaps something like:
OLD The operational requirements are defined in [RSSAC-001]. This document defines the protocol requirements and some deployment requirements. NEW This document only defines the protocol requirements and some deployment requirements; the operational requirements that were defined in RFC 2870 are removed. Operational requirements are now defined by the Root Server System Advisory Committee of ICANN and are documented in [RSSAC-001]. And then remove the second paragraph of 1.1, which becomes unnecessary.
4) I’ve also received feedback from IESG members that the text about moving 2870 to Historic in Section 1.1 could be problematic. While I’m not sure that is necessarily the case, I think this draft merely replaces 2870, so I am not sure we need to say anything more.
Yeah, I'm one of the folks who thinks "Historic" is unnecessary (and potentially a pain). The fact that this is obsoleting 2870 is sufficient, and all it really needs to do is replace 2870 in the BCP series by adding "BCP: 40 (if approved)" to the top. I'd just make that change and strike section 1.1 entirely.
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