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Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-stateful-issues-11
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:2015–2-28
IETF LC End Date: 2015–3-4
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Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Standard Track RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
- The document defines the terms “Identity association (IA)” and “IA option types” different from RFC3315 yet in the document sometimes this terms are as specified in RFC3315 including the IA_TA option. An example is for section with text changes.
- For clarification: Is this document going to be obsolete by draft-dhcwg-dhc-rfc3315bis, there are some sections that include changes to RFC3315 and RFC3633 and my reading is that this changes will be incorporated un the rfc3315bis draft. I am not sure about sections that provides clarifications and do not propose text changes.