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Hello Roni
I have made the changes and will post an updated version (version 08) later today.
Thanks
Rajesh
From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Tuesday, February 10, 2015 at 12:11 PM To: "gen-art@xxxxxxxx" <gen-art@xxxxxxxx>, "ietf@xxxxxxxx" <ietf@xxxxxxxx> Cc: "draft-ietf-netext-ani-location.all@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx" <draft-ietf-netext-ani-location.all@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netext-ani-location-07 Resent-From: <draft-alias-bounces@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> Resent-To: <bpatil1+ietf@xxxxxxxxx>, "brian@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx" <brian@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, John Kaippallimalil <John.Kaippallimalil@xxxxxxxxxx>, "jouni.nospam@xxxxxxxxx" <jouni.nospam@xxxxxxxxx>, "rajeev.koodli@xxxxxxxxx" <rajeev.koodli@xxxxxxxxx>, Rajesh Pazhyannur <rpazhyan@xxxxxxxxx>, <sespeich@xxxxxxxxx>, <sgundave@xxxxxxxxx> Resent-Date: Tuesday, February 10, 2015 at 12:11 PM I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:
draft-ietf-netext-ani-location-07 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2015–2-10 IETF LC End Date: 2015–2-12 IESG Telechat date:
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In section 1 “PBU” and “WLC” are mentioned but the full name appears later in the document. Should be specified when first used. |