Dear All, please kindly consider following comments as part of the IETF Last Call: • Abstract. Key test protocol aspects require the ability to control packet size on the tested path and enable asymmetrical packet size testing in a controller-responder architecture. I believe that in IPPM WG meeting in Toronto the WG agreed that support of asymmetrical test packet rate is required and support of asymmetrical packet size is recommended. Thus I propose following text update: Key test protocol aspects require the ability to control test packet characteristics on the tested path and enable asymmetrical test flow rates in controller-responder architecture. • Section 5. Test Protocol Control & Generation Requirements As the IPPM WG agreed that asymmetric test packet flow may be created by variation of not just packet size but intra-pair spacing and/or inter-pair interval, requirement #4 is not generic but presents only one possible solution. I propose
change requirement #4 to change from “asymmetric packet size” to “asymmetric packet flows in a two-way measurement architecture”. The next to the last paragraph suggests: Implementations may support control and generation for only symmetric packet sizes when none of the above conditions hold. I believe that this requirement (if it is a requirement, then s/may/MAY/ seems in order here) contradicts earlier explanation that mentions variation of intra-pair spacing and inter-pair interval as possible method to generate asymmetric
flow of test packets. Thus a protocol that can control spacing and/or intervals would be suitable to any combination of 1, 3, 4 and 6. Proposed text: Implementations MAY support control and generation of variable inter-pair intervals in each direction with symmetric packet sizes to support performance measurements of asymmetric data flows in two-way architecture. Regards, Greg |