On Tue, Nov 18, 2014 at 7:03 AM, Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@xxxxxxx> wrote:
On 11/14/14, 3:56 PM, Barry Leiba wrote:
> Thanks for your comments, Joseph.
>
> What, specifically (including suggested text) would you like to
> see changed in the document to address your comments?
I don't think we see changes to the text that would address our
concerns. Apologies if that's not a satisfying answer. best, Joe
Barry was asking that you propose specific text to replace or augment the text that's there now.
-MSK