On Tue 14/Oct/2014 00:25:29 +0200 The IESG wrote: > > The IESG has received a request from the Web Extensible Internet > Registration Data Service WG (weirds) to consider the following document: > - 'Finding the Authoritative Registration Data (RDAP) Service' > <draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09.txt> as Proposed Standard > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits > final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2014-10-27. A couple of notes. In the *Introduction*: The required new functionality in support of RDAP could be accomplished by augmenting these registries to contain new fields, or creating second parallel registries containing the extra fields whose entries mirror the existing ones. Either approach will satisfy the needs of this document. This is a hint to IANA, which might be moved to Section 12. It may sound confusing to client implementors. If it is moved, the next sentence could be reworded to read, e.g.: This document requests IANA to make an augmented version of the existing registries available for the specific purpose of RDAP use, herein named RDAP Bootstrap Service Registries. In Section 4, *Domain Name RDAP Bootstrap Service Registry*, the concept of longest match doesn't make sense. Say url1 does "com" and "net" while url2 does "com" only, then one will find: "services": [[["com", "net"], [url1]], [["com"], [url2]]] (An alternative, possibly easier for a client who needs to resolve a "com" domain, would be: "services": [[["com"], [url1, url2]], [["com", "net"], [url1]]] ) IANA delegates root entries only (not co.uk) so the /longest/ match is actually an /equal/ match, meaning that there might be multiple entries for a given name in different second-level arrays, as in the non-parenthesized case above. Correct? Finally, in Section 6 *Entity*, it is not obvious what one means by "entity". Perhaps is might be worth to insert a preamble, e.g.: Entities (such as contacts, registrants, or registrars) can be queried by handle as described in [I-D.ietf-weirds-rdap-query]. However, since there is no global namespace for entities, this document does not describe how to find... jm2c Ale