Ben et al: Here is the reasoning behind some of the issues you raise. At least one of them (SSRC re-use) is security critical. ========================================================================= SSRC Management: "If I read this section correctly, the draft requires central management of SSRC values when you have a master key shared among endpoints in a SRTP session, and goes so far to require authentication of data a central SSRC manager." Yes indeed, having unique SSRC values is a crucial requirement in aes-gcm, since using the same IV (i.e. (ROC,SEQ,SSRC) triple) with the same key K more than once results in two undesirable consequences: 1) It compromises secret authentication value H which is used to authenticate ALL messages that use the key K. 2) It effectively reveals the contents of any packets using this common IV value. Revealing the authentication key is a risk common to aes-gcm and many other AEAD algorithms. But revealing the message content is a risk for any key stream, including AES counter mode. RFC 3711 is willing to accept the compromise of some data, using the SRTP SSRC collision detection process to detect such a compromise after it has occurred. But for my user base, detecting a data compromise after it has occurred is insufficient. For any high value data stream, any data compromise has potentially disasterous consequences Though I didn't want to specify a mechanism for achieving the goal of having unique SSRCs, the solution I had in the back of my mind was a) Each source has its own key for encrypting its outgoing data streams. b) The key it uses to decrypt incoming data depends upon the originator. c) For a given key K, the burden of preventing SSRC reuse with K depends solely upon the single source forming outgoing data streams using that key. One way or another, using either the current I-D or RFC 3711 with high value data streams requires a mechanism that prevents the use of the same SSRC with two or more data sources that are using the same key on their outgoing data. This decentralizes the burden on SSRC management, but requires each source have its own outgoing data key. If some usage of STTP requires that multiple sources must use the same outgoing data key, a mechanism needs to be in place to impose some discipline on how the members of this subnet assign SSRC values. This holds for both RFC 3711 and the current I-D. ===================================================================================== "-- References: The draft has normative down ref to RFC 3610. This was not explicitly mentioned in the IETF last call email, and does not appear to be included in the down ref registry." Mea culpa, need to update this. ===================================================================================== -- 8.1: If this draft contradicts normative language from RFC 3711, it should explicitly update 3711. Its not so much that tie I-D updates updates as that it deale with a different context. In AEAD an algorithms integrity, is an intrinsic part of the encryption/decryption process, not a separate independent process. RFC 3711 implicitly assumes integrity and privacy are two separate processes, but that it not true of AES-GCM. For non-AEAD algorithms, RFC 3711 is correct in how it handles integrity, but AEAD an algorithm handle integrity in a radically different way and requires the modifications outlined in section 8.1. ===================================================================================== -- 8.2 Can you offer guidance on when it might be (or not be) necessary to disguise the length of the plaintext? Especially how that might be known at the SRTP layer? ===================================================================================== -- 14.1: Does the master salt need to be kept secret? If the answer is "it depends", can you offer guidance? Lurking in section 3.2.1 of RFC 3711 is the following bullet. * a master salt, to be used in the key derivation of session keys. This value, when used, MUST be random, but MAY be public. Use of master salt is strongly RECOMMENDED, see Section 9.2. A "NULL" salt is treated as 00...0. We took that to say that if the master salt MAY be public, it is also possible for it to be secret. I can not think of any instance in which it needs to be secret, but apparently the authors of RFC 3711 weren't quite so certain. ===================================================================================== Also, can you offer a definition of "properly erased"? Gladly! I mean overwritten, not just dereferenced. It's a bad idea to leave secret values floating around in memory, just waiting for an adversary to read them out. ===================================================================================== ----------------+-------------------------------------------------- Kevin M. Igoe | "We can't solve problems by using the same kind kmigoe@xxxxxxx | of thinking we used when we created them." | - Albert Einstein - ----------------+-------------------------------------------------- -----Original Message----- From: Ben Campbell [mailto:ben@xxxxxxxxxxx] Sent: Thursday, September 11, 2014 7:20 PM To: draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-aes-gcm.all@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx Cc: gen-art@xxxxxxxx Team (gen-art@xxxxxxxx); IETF Discussion Subject: Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-aes-gcm-14 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-aes-gcm-14 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2014-09-11 IETF LC End Date: 2014-09-11 Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a proposed standard, but there are open issues that should be addressed first. Note: I have not attempted to verify the pseudocode fragments in this draft. Major issues: [Note: I am on the fence on whether the following is a major or minor issue. I put it in the major section to draw attention to it, but I am prepared to downgrade it if discussion seems to suggest doing so.] -- Section 9.4, SSRC Management If I read this section correctly, the draft requires central management of SSRC values when you have a master key shared among endpoints in a SRTP session, and goes so far to require authentication of data a central SSRC manager. This seems like a pretty big architectural change to the handling of SSRC that would likely be an impediment to deployment. I also have to wonder if such an SSRC manager could become a central point of attack. I note that RFC 3711, section 9.1 talks about what I gather is the same issue, and does not seem to call for a central SSRC manager. Are the requirements here that different than for 3711? Minor issues: -- General: There are a number of instances of 2119 normative language that I suspect do not define new normative requirements as much as repeat normative requirements from elsewhere (either in this draft, or from elsewhere.) This creates confusion on which text is authoritative, and creates an opportunity for inconsistent normative statements about the same thing. I strongly suggest that anytime you repeat or summarize normative text that is authoritatively stated elsewhere, you either use descriptive (non-normative) language (e.g., Foo is required to bar the baz), or clearly attribute the source (e.g. [XXX] says that foo MUST bar the baz.) -- References: The draft has normative down ref to RFC 3610. This was not explicitly mentioned in the IETF last call email, and does not appear to be included in the down ref registry. -- 8.1: If this draft contradicts normative language from RFC 3711, it should explicitly update 3711. -- 8.2 Can you offer guidance on when it might be (or not be) necessary to disguise the length of the plaintext? Especially how that might be known at the SRTP layer? -- 14.1: Does the master salt need to be kept secret? If the answer is "it depends", can you offer guidance? Also, can you offer a definition of "properly erased"? Nits/editorial comments: -- There is a citation of RFC2675, but it doesn't appear in the references. -- The abstract is out of place (Should be at beginning.) -- section 1, third paragraph: "... provides a high level of security ..." That may change over time. I suggest prefacing with "At the time of this writing..." -- section 3, last paragraph: Please expand IV on first mention. -- section 5.3, last paragraph: First and last sentence seem to contradict each other. -- 15.1: The IANA registration section for the SDES crypto-suites is oddly stated. That registry is just a table; the use of the srtp-crypto-suite-ext ABNF construction may be confusing.