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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-jose-json-web-algorithms-31
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:2014–9-1
IETF LC End Date: 2014–9-3
IESG Telechat date:
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
- Section 4.8 “This section defines the specifies” should be “specifics”
- Section 5.2.2 “Section 5.2.3 and Section 5.2.5” should be “through” since 5.2.4 also defines instances.
- Section 5.2.2.1 in bullet 1 “the values of these parameters are specified by the AEAD algorithms (in Section 5.2.3 and Section 5.2.5)”. Did you mean AEAD in which case is should be expanded and a reference is probably needed or do you need to change it to Authenticated Encryption? Also the “and” should be “through” same as previous comment.
- In section 5.2.2.1 bullet 4 for “number of bits in A“ I had to go to bullet 5 to see what A is. Maybe add also here “additional authenticated data”