Viktor,
... My response was -03. If you're just resending the comments for stale versions of the work in progress, I can't really make use of those I'm afraid. They've already been processed and taken seriously.
You ignored/rejected detailed suggestions that would, IMHO, significantly improve the text. Thus most of my comments are still applicable.I'll go through the exercise of reviewing the posted -03 version, and providing feedback,
again, late this week. Steve