All - it is clear that you have a concern about the new note well text. The problem has been well articulated; personally, I'd be happy with some of the edits suggested. However, it is probably better if we do the word-smithing separately and come back with a proposal. I have asked the IESG to consider the situation and the need for a new version of the note well and/or reverting to the old version. Thanks for the feedback, as always! Jari