Dear Roni, Thank you for the review. Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : Roni Even [mailto:ron.even.tlv@xxxxxxxxx] I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pcp-description-option-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2014–1-26 IETF LC End Date: 2014–2-4 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. I am not sure what the use of the “description” option is. I can see how to create one but as for usage the only text I can see is “Querying the PCP server to get the description text of an existing mapping is out of scope.” I think that the document should provide information about the purpose of this option. [Med] The main usage is for a user to associate a textual description with a mapping. This is captured by this text “ This option can be used by a user (or an application) to indicate a description associated with a given mapping such as "FTP server", "My remote access to my CP router", "Camera", "Network attached storage serve", etc. ” Nits/editorial comments:
[Med] Required information as per RFC6887 is provided in http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pcp-description-option-03#section-2. |