So this doesn't get lost, here comments I sent to the authors before starting IETF last call... > Dan will probably want to update his coordinates. > > --- > > You don't need to be so enthusiastic with your acronyms in Section 1.2 > The following are "well known" according to > http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt > > GMPLS Generalized MPLS > LDP Label Distribution Protocol > MPLS Multiprotocol Label Switching > > There is a serial comma missing from > OAM Operations, Administration and Maintenance > The comma is also missing in your text. > > --- > > In Section 1.3 you say > > There is no definition for MPLS TE-LSP support of multipoint-to- > multipoint connectivity and none is anticipated. > > Without opening up a discussion of whether what you cay is true, can you > say why it is relevant? Perhaps "This document is limited to a > discussion of point-to-multipoint function and does not discuss > multipoint-to-multipoint support." You might also move this to Section > 1.1. > -----Original Message----- > From: mpls [mailto:mpls-bounces@xxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of The IESG > Sent: 02 January 2014 15:17 > To: IETF-Announce > Cc: mpls@xxxxxxxx > Subject: [mpls] Last Call: <draft-ietf-mpls-tp-p2mp-framework-05.txt> (A > Framework for Point-to-Multipoint MPLS in Transport Networks) to Informational > RFC > > > The IESG has received a request from the Multiprotocol Label Switching WG > (mpls) to consider the following document: > - 'A Framework for Point-to-Multipoint MPLS in Transport Networks' > <draft-ietf-mpls-tp-p2mp-framework-05.txt> as Informational RFC > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits > final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2014-01-16. Exceptionally, comments may be > sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the > beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Abstract > > The Multiprotocol Label Switching Transport Profile is the common set > of MPLS protocol functions defined to enable the construction and > operation of packet transport networks. The MPLS-TP supports both > point-to-point and point-to-multipoint transport paths. This > document defines the elements and functions of the MPLS-TP > architecture applicable specifically to supporting point-to- > multipoint transport paths. > > > The file can be obtained via > http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-tp-p2mp-framework/ > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-tp-p2mp-framework/ballot/ > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > _______________________________________________ > mpls mailing list > mpls@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mpls