In the process of doing the apps area review, I came across some
points that were not related to applications. The basis for these
comments is precisely the sentiment that Russ Housley expressed,
which is that the specification is done when there is no more to
remove. With this document, I wonder if quite a bit could be
removed. Specifically, a great deal of discussion goes into the PRF
involving DAD counters, etc, when all that is needed is a suitable
PRF. The draft in fact says this in Section 3 after an
explanation of the inputs. Any PRF that follows the guidelines of
RFC 4086 should do fine and not cause interoperability OR security
problems. Put simply, you are over-specifying the RID and derive
no benefit from doing so. Also, the following text in section 3 Page 7 is contorted: My suggestion is to simplify remove it as it is self-evident. Finally, this algorithm requires that the resultant host portion
be 64 bits. Is that necessary? Eliot |