Hi Russ,
At 08:43 22-03-2013, Russ Housley wrote:
RFC 2050 contains rules that are superseded by RIR policies.
That doesn't explain the label. :-)
This document replaces RFC 2050. Since the publication of RFC 2050,
the Internet Numbers Registry System has changed
significantly. This document describes the present Internet Numbers
Registry System.
I suggest adding text, for example, what is mentioned above.
RFC 2860 seems to be a fine reference. We could find others, but
this seems to be good enough.
Ok.
The authors will try to improve the wording. The discussion of IANA
should probably say that IANA represents to top of the IP address
and AS number allocation hierarchies.
There is already text in the first paragraph of Section 2. I suggest
leaving it to that.
This points to the policy structure that replaces the rules that
were in RFC 2050.
John Curran responded to this. The current text is not clear. If
you would like to remove policy text it may be better not to get into
policy text.
No actions at this time.
I suggest removing the IANA Considerations Section.
It should be informative.
I don't see how it would be referenced in the draft then. I suggest
removing that reference.
Regards,
-sm