Hi Greg, Please, see my other email I just sent. Thanks, Nabil From: Gregory Mirsky <gregory.mirsky@xxxxxxxxxxxx> Date: Tuesday, January 8, 2013 11:45 AM To: Loa Andersson <loa@xxxxx> Cc: "pwe3@xxxxxxxx" <pwe3@xxxxxxxx>, "gen-art@xxxxxxxx" <gen-art@xxxxxxxx>, "dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx" <dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx>, Sagessi <sajassi@xxxxxxxxx>, "ietf@xxxxxxxx" <ietf@xxxxxxxx> Subject: Re: [PWE3] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 Dear Huub and Loa, my brain did s/Reverese/Remote/ by itself. Indeed, 802.1ag and Y.1731 use RDI for Remote Defect Indication, and nothing in Reverse. And that how draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 should expand RDI as well. Regards, Greg -----Original Message----- From: pwe3-bounces@xxxxxxxx [mailto:pwe3-bounces@xxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Loa Andersson Sent: Tuesday, January 08, 2013 3:02 AM To: Greg Mirsky Subject: Re: [PWE3] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 Greg, RFC 6428 expands RDI as: RDI: Remote Defect Indication /Loa On 2013-01-07 21:51, Greg Mirsky wrote: > Dear Nabil, > can we avoid different interpretation of the same abbreviation (RDI): > > RDI Remote Defect Indication for Continuity Check Message > > RDI Reverse Defect Indication > > AFAIK, the latter form is the interpretation used by both IEEE 802.1ag > and Y.1731. How useful is the first form? > > Regards, > > Greg > > > > On Fri, Jan 4, 2013 at 8:17 AM, Bitar, Nabil N > > Hi Dave, > Related to abbreviations comment below and to be clearer, I renamed > the original terminology section to "Abbreviations and Terminology". > I also created a subsection called "Abbreviations" ,and > "Terminology" became the second subsection. Here iis how the > edits look > > > 3. Abbreviations and Terminology____ > > > 3.1. Abbreviations____ > > AISAlarm Indication Signal____ > > ACAttachment Circuit____ > > BFDBidirectional Forwarding Detection____ > > CCContinuity Check____ > > CCMContinuity Check Message____ > > CECustomer Equipment____ > > CVConnectivity Verification____ > > E-LMI Ethernet Local Management Interface____ > > EVCEthernet Virtual Circuit____ > > LDPLabel Distribution Protocol____ > > LoSLoss of Signal____ > > MAMaintenance Association____ > > MDMaintenance Domain____ > > MEMaintenance Entity____ > > MEGMaintenance Entity Group____ > > MEPMaintenance End Point____ > > MIPMaintenance End Point____ > > MPLSMultiprotocol Label Switching____ > > MS-PW Multi-Segment Pseudowire____ > > NSNative Service____ > > OAMOperations, Administration, and Maintenance____ > > PEProvider Edge____ > > PSNPacket Switched Network____ > > PWPseudowire____ > > RDIRemote Defect Indication for Continuity Check Message____ > > RDI Reverse Defect Indication > > S-PESwitching Provider Edge____ > > TLVType Length Value____ > > T-PETerminating Provider Edge____ > > __ __ > > > 3.2. Terminology____ > > This document uses the following terms with corresponding > definitions: ____ > > - MD Level:Maintenance Domain (MD) Level which identifies a value in > the range of 0-7 associated with Ethernet OAM frame. MD Level > identifies the span of the Ethernet OAM frame.____ > > - MEP:Maintenance End Point is responsible for origination and > termination of OAM frames for a given MEG.____ > > - MIP: Maintenance Intermediate Point is located between peer MEPs > and can process OAM frames but does not initiate or terminate > them.____ > > Further, this document also uses the terminology and conventions > used in [RFC6310].____ > > > > Thanks, > > Nabil > > > From: <Bitar>, Nabil N <nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Date: Wednesday, January 2, 2013 11:28 AM > To: "Black, David" <david.black@xxxxxxx > <mailto:dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx>>, "Bitar, Nabil N" > <mailto:nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>>, Sagessi <sajassi@xxxxxxxxx > Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 > > Hi Dave, > Sorry for a late reply addressing your comments. Please, see inline. > > Thanks, > Nabil > > From: "Black, David" <david.black@xxxxxxx <mailto:david.black@xxxxxxx>> > Date: Monday, August 20, 2012 8:57 PM > <dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx>>, "Bitar, Nabil > <mailto:nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>>, Sagessi <sajassi@xxxxxxxxx > Cc: "Black, David" <david.black@xxxxxxx > <mailto:ietf@xxxxxxxx>> > Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please > see the FAQ at > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call > comments you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 > Reviewer: David L. Black > Review Date: August 20, 2012 > IETF LC End Date: August 20, 2012 > > Summary: > This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that > should be fixed before publication. > > <NB> Thanks. > > This draft covers defect behavior for Ethernet pseudowires, > > including defect state mapping and PE defect reporting behavior. > > The draft is generally in good shape. I found a few minor nits. > > 1) The draft uses a lot of acronyms - while each acronym appears > to > > be expanded on first use, an additional section near the start of > the > > draft listing all of them would be helpful. > > > <NB> Done. > > 2) There's a typo in the first paragraph of section 2: > > covers the following Ethernet OAM (Opertaions, > Administration and > > Opertaions -> Operations. > > > <NB> Thanks. Done. > > 3) The following normative reference is incomplete - please add > additional > > information that will enable a reader to locate the referenced document: > > [MEF16] "Ethernet Local Management Interface", MEF16, January > 2006. > > > [MEF16] "Ethernet Local Management Interface", Metro Ethernet Forum > Technical Specification MEF16, January 2006. > > <NB> changed it to : > > 4) idnits2.12.13 did not like the pagination: > > == The page length should not exceed 58 lines per page, but there > was 22 > longer pages, the longest (page 1) being 61 lines > > <NB> That will be fixed. > Thanks, > --David > ---------------------------------------------------- > David L. 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