I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-14 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Nov-29-2012 IETF LC End Date: Oct-22-2012 IESG Telechat date: Nov-29-2012 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a nit that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] All other corrections from the -13 review were accepted and the other changes in the current version appear reasonable. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Section 4.2.1.8, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: bracket "Section 2.8.1" in "(see" and ")" for readability. [This is my same suggestion from the previous review. I won't mention it again, I promise. :-) ]