Nice job. One comment:
On Thu, Jun 21, 2012 at 6:10 PM, IETF Chair <chair@xxxxxxxx> allegedly wrote:
If you write, say, or discuss anything in the IETF, formally or informally,
Can you fit "even between meetings" at the end of this line? Some people will think "in the IETF" refers to physical meetings, and may not get through the detailed info that comes later.
(all of which we call "a contribution") that you know is covered by a patent
or patent application you or your employer own, one of you must disclose
that.
I also like know -> believe.
Thanks ... Scott