Comments for <I-D of Publishing the "Tao of the IETF" as a Web Page>

[Abdussalam Baryun <abdussalambaryun@xxxxxxxxx>]

The abstract mentions 'many people',  because many people may mean 4 to 10 people. The annonced I-D lacks the method of discussion in the community (discussing such change), the draft mentions the input from any community individual to be accepted by editor and then approved by IESG, but does not mention the methodology of discussion between community members nor between editor and members, also no announcements of such updates mentioned in draft.

suggest> amend in abstract the word 'many' to the word  'some', or mention like in the introduction the desire of community.

suggest> to add> to the draft that a discussion group to discuss inputs/suggestions before the editors undertakes changes. The draft to specify the discussion ( may be either on-List or during the IETF meetings). I prefer to mention; the face-to-face IETF meeting discussion in this procedure issue.

suggest> to add>  the announcement for last call of Tao changes by the IESG, 

suggest> replace in section2> line 7> The editor of the Tao decides which proposed changes should be submitted to the IESG for the next version of the Tao.

     replace with> The editor of the Tao decides which proposed changes should be

                          submitted to the IESG for the next version of the Tao after

                          the community discussed the changes. 

suggest> A time period of updates to be made, and input from the community to be collected, and editor to submit to IESG. It will be helpful also to 

AB

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On Fri, Jun 15, 2012 at 9:29 PM, The IESG <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx> wrote:

The IESG has received a request from an individual submitter to consider
the following document:
- 'Publishing the "Tao of the IETF" as a Web Page'
 <draft-hoffman-tao-as-web-page-02.txt> as Informational RFC

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2012-07-13. Exceptionally, comments may be
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Abstract


  Discussion of the "Tao of the IETF" during 2012 made it clear that
  many people want the document published only as a web page, not as an
  RFC that needs to be periodically updated.  This document specifies
  how the Tao will be published as a web page.




The file can be obtained via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-hoffman-tao-as-web-page/

IESG discussion can be tracked via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-hoffman-tao-as-web-page/ballot/


No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.